Reviews For Brothers
Name: marcie (Signed) · Date: 04/29/2013 1:32 pm · For: Chapter 1
Thanks for your comment yes it was a bit too fast.I wanted to change the concept a bit so i think i got it now.
Name: Foxxy (Signed) · Date: 12/15/2012 3:51 pm · For: Chapter 1
Well, I just read this first chapter. I think it's good. I even understand the text. (I'm from Slovakia.) It was funny- i loved those parts. And this chapter was pretty long- that's a big plus!
I didn't like that the story was... how should I say it... too fast. Bonnie came there, suddenly she kissed Daniel. It was a very quick action. You should describe more! But, I like it at all. So, I am going to read another chapters. :)