Isnt there a next chapter to this fanfic
This story had me feeling like I was good.
In my open opinion shop this was like a story but more than that it was a passage of writing that will keep me figthing until simply orange juice stoer closes. While this sotry is invincible I cant help but wonder if they liked the microwavable cheeseburgers you cna get at safeway for $1.25 a piece. That is my thouht.
Thank you for the review I'm glad you liked it.
The story so far was good, especially the songs. The wordings and everything about the songs were just great. There are spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. But then, there are only few authors who don't make mistakes. The paragraphs are too long. Make sure that you have 7-8 lines minimum on a paragraph. Long paragraphs make readers groan. And also check your story after you've typed it for anything at all. When you're reading your story, after completing it, read it as a critic. Opposing your own work. That will help refine your stories. Anbd the story was reall great. Please do finish it.
Thank you for the review it means a lot. I did check it a few times before I posted it but I guess I still missed some things. I will take your advice on board and try to change for the better. Again thank you very much :)